3個作文差的原因
- 詞彙量 不多元化
- Grammar 不夠好. 成日比老師改到 好多紅色錯
- 無框架無例子 內容不夠多
今日就嚟幫大家避免一啲常見嘅grammar error,提升第二點
3個港人必錯的Errors
好多香港人都會係寫英文既時候錯好容易犯以下嘅Grammar mistake,大家要學咗佢、避免犯啊!
1. 過度使用adverbs
好多人會鍾意喺一句句子入面加入adverbs
並非話咁做係錯,但會顯得選字很弱,可以用其他詞彙去代替使用。
例如:
The boy ran really fast to catch the runaway ball. (x)
The boy sprinted to catch the runway ball. (v)
2. Comma連接不當
如果你將兩句獨立句子強行用comma分割,有可能會出現Grammar上既錯誤。要解決呢個問題,可以將comma轉做full stop,或以連接詞補上。
例如:
He was very hungry, he ate a whole pizza. (x)
He was very hungry. He ate a whole pizza. (v)
He was very hungry, so he ate a whole pizza. (v)
3. 避免寫連寫句(run-on sentence)
很多人都會犯呢個錯誤,就係喺句子應該寫上句號既時候,你仲要硬寫落去,所以要善用連接詞同標點符號。
例如:
Lila enjoyed the bouquet of tulips John gave her on prom night however she prefers roses. (x)
Lila enjoyed the bouquet of tulips John gave her on prom night; however, she prefers roses. (v)
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