【Speech 格式】3大實用原則寫好 DSE英文演講辭❗️【5**範文+終極指南】

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Speech 格式

今期小編將為大家分享另一個實用文格式 – speech 格式 。

至於如何可以成功寫作一篇好的演講辭,贏得所有marker的歡心? 

小編就立刻為大家介紹寫作技巧及 speech 格式 的注意事項。

Speech 格式

以下是一個非常標準的演講辭格式:

Greeting (例如:Good morning principal, teachers and fellow students)

opening

正文段落 1(Body Paragraph 1)

正文段落 2(Body Paragraph 2)

正文段落 3(Body Paragraph 3)

結論(Conclusion)

Thank you (通常最後會加)

DSE Speech Format

Speech 格式

Speech 格式 千篇一律,尤其DSE的卷,基本上都是一樣的 (Debate speech 格式 會在這個基礎上增加一些格式條件),所以只要緊記格式就不需要另作改變,更不要另外自行創作!!!

DSE Speech

speech writing DSE

speech是一種涉及與聽眾交談或進行演示的交流。 總統講話是演講的一個例子。

不過 DSE English paper 2/paper 3 不會那麼嚴肅的!

但DSE英文卷二卷三已經較少表明要求學生寫speech,反而會轉另一字,

例如:

announcement in morning assembly

newsletter announcement

presentation script

學生們要感受到DSE想大家寫類近speech的文體。

當然DSE對 Speech 格式 都有少少要求,這個在其後向大家展示!

Speech 演講辭是什麼

演講辭實用文

DSE Speech 格式

Speech“這個詞可以用來指演講辭,即為特定場合或目的而編寫和發表的口頭表達。

演講辭是一種口頭表達形式,通常在公眾場合或特殊活動中使用,如演講、儀式、會議或學術研討會等。

演講辭的目的是通過有組織、有力和有說服力的言辭,向聽眾傳達特定的信息、觀點、理念或感情。

如果您想在DSE Writing取得Level 5+ 成績,小編建議您同時閱讀另一篇文章關於 Debate Speech 格式,是關於Debate Speech部份的更新版本。裏面有詳細解釋以及滿分範文

Speech 格式 1. Greeting

speech greeting

DSE Speech Greeting 打招呼

Greeting是演講中的第一部分,它能為整個演講設定基調,並與聽眾建立連結。

Greeting 打招呼的作用包括:

  1. 建立關係:向聽眾問候能營造友好和歡迎的氛圍,讓聽眾感到更舒適和投入。這有助於在演講者和聽眾之間建立積極的關係。

  2. 表示尊重:問候是對聽眾的尊重的表達。它承認他們的存在,感謝他們的時間和關注。這表明演講者重視聽眾的參與,視他們為重要的個體。

  3. 創造共融感:透過問候聽眾,演講者承認聽眾的多樣性和集體存在。這有助於培養團結和包容感,讓每個人都感到參與其中,成為活動或場合的一部分。

例句:

Good morning Principal, teachers and my fellow schoolmates,

Ladies and gentlemen,

Distinguished guests,

Honorable members of the audience,

Good morning/afternoon/evening,

I hope you are all doing well on this [insert day and date].

Speech 格式 2. 開頭/引言

speech introduction

Speech 開頭寫作技巧

開頭部分是你與聽眾建立聯繫的機會。

通過表明你的身份和對演講主題的熱情,你可以向聽眾展示你的專業知識、經驗或者與主題相關的故事,這有助於建立信任和共鳴。

透過營造一種與聽眾的共同感與連結,你能夠增強他們對你的演講的信心和興趣。

Step 1: 表明身份 (視乎情況,有時候不需要)

當你表明自己的身份時,聽眾會對你的專業知識和經驗產生信任和認可。這有助於建立你與聽眾之間的信任關係,讓他們更願意接受你的觀點和意見。

例句:

As a medical researcher with over 10 years of experience, I have dedicated my career to finding innovative solutions to improve healthcare outcomes.

作為一名擁有超過10年經驗的醫學研究員,我將我的職業生涯致力於尋找創新解決方案,以改善醫療保健的結果。

As an environmental activist, I have witnessed firsthand the devastating effects of pollution on our planet, and it is my mission to raise awareness and drive change for a sustainable future.

作為一名環境活動家,我親眼目睹了污染對我們的地球所帶來的毀滅性影響,我的使命是提高意識,推動改變,為可持續的未來而努力。

Step 2: 激發聽眾好奇心

在寫引言時,我們可以採用多種策略,例如:

引用名人名言或相關的歷史事件,以吸引聽眾的興趣和共鳴。

As Albert Einstein once said, ‘Imagination is more important than knowledge.’ This quote not only captures the essence of creative thinking but also resonates with the idea that curiosity drives progress.

正如阿爾伯特·愛因斯坦曾經說過的:“想像力比知識更重要。”這句名言不僅捕捉了創造性思維的本質,也呼應了好奇心推動進步的觀念。

提出一個引人入勝的故事或個人經歷,使聽眾能夠在情感上與演講者建立聯繫。

Let me share with you a captivating personal story that has shaped my perspective on perseverance. It was a moment of triumph over adversity that taught me the true meaning of resilience.

讓我與你分享一個引人入勝的個人故事,它塑造了我對毅力的觀點。那是一個在逆境中取得勝利的時刻,教會了我堅韌的真正含義。

引用令人驚訝或引人深思的事實或統計數據,以引發聽眾的好奇心和思考。

Did you know that a single act of kindness has the power to create a ripple effect, impacting not only the recipient but also those who witness it? This astonishing fact highlights the potential for positive change within each of us.

你知道嗎,一次善行有著創造漣漪效應的力量,不僅影響受助者,還影響目睹這一切的人?這個令人驚訝的事實凸顯了我們每個人內在積極變革的潛力。

提出一個引人注目的問題,激發聽眾的思考和參與。

Have you ever pondered the significance of failure in the journey towards success? What if I told you that failure is not the opposite of success but a stepping stone towards it? This thought-provoking question challenges us to reshape our perception of failure and embrace it as a valuable learning experience.

你曾經思考過在成功之路上失敗的意義嗎?如果我告訴你,失敗不是成功的對立面,而是通向成功的墊腳石呢?這個引人注目的問題挑戰我們重新塑造對失敗的看法,並將其視為寶貴的學習經驗。

Step 3: 進入主題

進入主題的過程可以幫助聽眾進入演講的內容和主題。

它提供了一個平滑的過渡,使聽眾能夠理解演講的目的和重點,並準備好接受進一步的訊息。

同時進入主題幫助你在演講中明確設定焦點。

透過提供一個簡明扼要的介紹,你可以讓聽眾知道你將要討論的內容和主題,並且避免他們在演講中迷失方向或感到困惑。

例句:

Without further ado, let’s dive right into it. In today’s speech, I’d like to highlight 3 major points, including A, B and C.

廢話少說,直接深入討論。在今天的演講中,我想要強調三個主要點,包括A、B和C。

Imagine a world where clean energy powers our cities, and future generations can thrive in a sustainable environment.

想像一個清潔能源驅動城市的世界,未來的世代可以在可持續的環境中茁壯成長。

Did you know that approximately one-third of all food produced globally goes to waste? It’s time for us to take action and address this pressing issue.

你知道全球約三分之一的食物被浪費了嗎?是時候讓我們采取行動,解決這個迫切的問題了。

Speech 格式 3. 內文

speech main content

Speech 內文寫作技巧

Speech內容最重要的是確定演講的結構,包括開場白、主要內容和結語。使用有邏輯的論述、主題句等,幫助聽眾更容易理解和跟隨你的論點。

Step 1 主題句 

主題句是一個段落中最重要的句子,它概括了整個段落的主題和重點。寫作時,確定一個明確的主題句可以幫助您更好地組織您的想法,並使您的段落更加清晰和易於理解。

例句:

Effective communication empowers teams to achieve their goals and drive success.

有效溝通使團隊能夠實現目標並成功。

Education equips individuals with knowledge and skills necessary for personal growth and professional development.

教育為個人成長和職業發展提供所需的知識和技能。

Step 2 RICE 

如何把內容寫的飽滿?

  • R – Reasons
  • I – Impact
  • C – Compare
  • E – Examples

透過這4個嚮導,大家便可以提升內容全面性。

當然不一定要所有4各方向都全用!

例如:

主題句 Topic Sentence

Moreover, grades can have detrimental effects on students’ mental health and well-being.

此外,成績會對學生的心理健康和福祉產生不利影響。

原因 Reason

The intense pressure to achieve high grades leads to stress, anxiety, and burnout.

取得高分的巨大壓力會導致壓力、焦慮和倦怠。

影響 impact

Students become more focused on chasing grades rather than pursuing genuine learning and intellectual curiosity.

學生變得更專注於追求成績,而不是追求真正的學習和求知欲。

Step 3 總結句

總結句應該要結合主要論點,回顧你在演講中提到的主要論點。這可以幫助你向聽眾強調你的核心訊息,並提醒他們你所討論的重點。

另外,在總結句中強調你的主要論點的重要性和價值。你可以談論它們對個人、社會或組織的影響,以及為什麼這些觀點或建議是值得被重視的。

例句:

As you can see, it is crucial that we prioritize sustainable development and find innovative solutions to combat environmental challenges.

如你所見,我們必須優先考慮可持續發展,並找到創新解決方案來應對環境挑戰。

To wrap up, let us remember that small acts of kindness can have a profound impact on individuals and society as a whole.

總結來說,讓我們記住小小的善舉對個人和整個社會都能產生深遠的影響。

Speech 內文搶分位

上述的技巧已經可以協助你寫出結構嚴謹的speech內文段落。

不過,如果您想取高分 5/5*/5**

你還需要speech的獨特搶分位……

speech body paragraph

問5** 問題

例如

If we violate school rules, we will receive punishment like staying after school while teachers meet our parents.

如果我們違反學校規定,我們將受到懲罰,例如留校等待老師與我們的家長會面。

Do you want to spend your precious time  staying in a vacant classroom to wait for the end of your punishment or playing basketball happily with your friends on the basketball court (情景)?

你想要將寶貴的時間浪費在一個空教室裡等待懲罰結束,還是在籃球場上與朋友們快樂地打籃球呢?

It is important for us to follow the school rules in order to have an enjoyable school life. 

遵守學校規定對於擁有愉快的校園生活是非常重要的。

其他問問題方法:

  • Have you wondered why 句子? 
  • What would you do if you were me?

代入角色

Level 5 **

As a former student at ABC College, I’m quite sure you haven’t pondered over these benefits but I think we will be more confident and when gaining peer recognition and acceptance, won’t we?

作為 ABC 學院的前學生,我很確定您沒有考慮過這些好處,但我認為當我們獲得同行的認可和接受時,我們會更加自信,不是嗎?

其他句式:

  • I bet all of you share a similar experience.
  • At this point, you probably wonder 名詞
  • You may wonder why 句子

畫面大法 + (排比句)

Level 5*

Our school doesn’t allow using mobile phones during lessons. Following the school rules can lead us to success. Imagine when you are concentrating in class, some annoying sound from a mobile phone distracts you (畫面大法).

我們學校不允許在課堂上使用手機。遵守學校規定可以帶領我們走向成功。想像一下,當你在課堂上專心學習時,一部手機傳來的煩人聲音分散了你的注意力。

You can imagine the joy of hanging out with friends; you can imagine the joy of working hard together; you can imagine the joy of achieving common goals. (排比句)

你可以想像和朋友一起出去的快樂;你可以想像一起努力工作的快樂;你可以想像實現共同目標的快樂。

Level 5**

Picture this scene: a group of naughty students are eating when the teacher is talking;some classmates are using their phones while others are conducting an experiment in the laboratory;several boys are using foul languages when chatting (畫面大法).

想像這樣的場景:一群調皮的學生正在吃東西,老師正在說話; 有的同學在玩手機,有的同學在實驗室做實驗; 幾個男孩在聊天時使用粗言穢語 。

What do you think? Would  you like to study in such a school? Do you want your schoolmates to be one of them? (類似排比句,連續三個問題)

你怎麼認為? 你想在這樣的學校學習嗎? 你希望你的同學成為他們中的一員嗎?

與觀眾互動/留意觀眾反應

Speech很強調與聽眾互動。除了問問題外,我們還可以留意觀眾的反應。

例句:

Great, I see that many of you are shaking your heads.

太好了,我看到你們很多人都在搖頭。

Speech 格式 4. 結論

speech conclusion

Speech 結尾寫作技巧

在一篇出色的英文演講辭中,結論部分非常重要,其功能在於總結觀點,讓聽眾對今次的主題留下深刻的印象。

因此,結論部分可以先回顧一下正文中提到的主要觀點,再次強調自己的立場,接著感謝觀眾的耐心聆聽和主辦方的邀請,最後為主題或觀眾寄語。

Step 1: 回顧内容

在結論部分的開始,回顧一下你在演講中涵蓋的主要內容。簡要概括演講的重點和要點,以便讓聽眾記住你所傳達的訊息。這是一個提醒聽眾的好方法,同時也有助於鞏固你的觀點。

例句:

In conclusion, we’ve discussed the importance of environmental conservation and the role that each and every one of us plays in preserving our planet

總結來說,我們已經討論了環境保護的重要性,以及每個人在保護我們的地球中所扮演的角色。

Step 2: 希望在明天

在結論中,表達你對未來的期望和願景。分享你對解決問題、實現目標或改善狀況的希望。這將激發聽眾的積極性,並讓他們感到你對未來的信心。

例句:

My hope is that today’s discussion has inspired you to take action, and to become more mindful of the impact your actions have on the environment. 

我希望今天的討論能激勵您採取行動,並更加留意您的行為對環境的影響。

Step 3: 感謝觀衆

結論部分的最後,向觀眾表達感謝之情。感謝他們的聆聽和參與,並強調他們的重要性。這是一個禮貌和感激的方式,向他們傳達你對他們的關注和尊重。

例句:

Once again, thank you for being here today, and for your commitment to creating a better world.

再次感謝您今天的參與,以及您對創造更美好世界的承諾。

DSE Writing Speech 3大原則

DSE Writing Speech

語境意識

相信大家都不會陌生了,又是我們的老朋友 – 語境意識。

由於是演講辭,一般而言它的作用在於向一群聽眾發表演說,所以它所採取的為informal的格式,不會在用詞或寫作上過份認真和深究。

我們可以用短句例如:

Just go for it!

Stay tuned! 

Don’t waver.

可以說,它其中的一個目的報求令到演講者能夠成功傳達訊息外,聽眾也不會睡著。

當然演講辭也有機會被用作一個嚴肅莊嚴的場合所以寫作時也不能過份輕鬆,必先留意題目給予的角色再作定論。

搞笑

無錯,大家無聽錯就是搞笑。基於演講辭不是一篇formal的寫作,而且需要吸引既定聽眾的注意力,所以不會有更好的方法能夠達成目標,除了搞笑。

不過要切記,這裏所提及的搞笑並不是你現實生活中所開的玩笑。

畢竟你在寫作的時候,你身處於一個考試之中,所以你必須考慮你所寫的這個玩笑,改卷老師是否能看懂。

因此最佳的建議狀況,是寫作一些並不好笑但輕鬆易明的玩笑,務求向改卷老師展現你有寫作演講辭的寫作技巧而且他不會誤會你。

例如在玩笑過後加上一句 “Just kidding”這樣便可以萬無一失了。

問問題/反問

青少年,時時刻刻都要保持好奇心,要做「問題青年」,而寫作演講辭就是一個好好的途徑去抒發你的問題。

除了搞笑,問問題引起別人的思考也是吸引聽眾注意力的一個方法。

問題可以加在演講辭的任何一個部分,可以是開首利用問題引起注意,也可以是內文部分問問題加強聽眾的共鳴,也可以在文末問問題引起反思和扣題。

透過問問題,你的演講辭便能夠進一步展現互動性不會過於沉悶及單一。

例如:

Have you heard of …?

Do you know..? 

Have you ever thought of …?

總括而言,演講辭的寫作雖然輕鬆,但是有很多值得注意的地方可以區分出你的寫作與他人的分別。

最重要的還是熟讀題目按題目的要求寫出合適的演講辭,而加上不同的元素配合主題。

能夠隨機應變,配合不同主題而寫作才是考驗你們的功力所在。

DSE Speech 範文

DSE Speech Sample

DSE English Speech Sample

是次範文是取自 2021 DSE Writing Part A 5** speech 滿分42/42範文

DSE Speech 範文 題目

You are helping your school organize the annual school fair. You have been ask to make an announcement about the event during the morning assembly.

Use the poster below to help you write your announcement. In your announcement:

  • Introduce the event.
  • Describe some of the activities that will take place.
  • Let students know how they can help out
2021 DSE Writing Part A Speech

2021 DSE Writing Part A 部份一

【打招呼】

Good morning, Principal, teachers and fellow students.

2021 DSE Writing Part A 部份二

【激起觀眾好奇心】

If I were to ask you what the large tragedy of 2020 was, what would you say? Perhaps the unfortunate cancellation of the annual school fair last year?

【進入主題】

Well, if that’s the case, fear not, as I am incredibly proud to announce that our annual school fair will be making a comeback on 29th May 2021 from 12 pm to 4 pm! So, why should you go? Listen on to find out! 

2021 DSE Writing Part A 部份三

The day will start with a “bang” at the food stalls, so forget lunch and come stuff yourself silly instead! Our Home Economic club has been teasing us with utterly delectable Takoyaki balls, filled to the brim with fresh octopus, covered with a truly decadent mozzarella and goat cheese sauce.

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Be careful, or else you might find yourself literally speechless and tongue-tied by octopus tentacle – that’s just how fresh they are (just kidding)! Have an insatiable sweet tooth?

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Check out the dessert booth and be on the lookout for the chocolate custard tarts, with a scrumptious core of white chocolate. Bon appetit! 

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In addition to the mouthwatering food and exhilarating alumni football match, the school fair offers a plethora of engaging activities that cater to everyone’s interests. For those who appreciate art and creativity, the art exhibition is a must-visit. Our talented students have poured their hearts and souls into their artworks, showcasing their unique perspectives and artistic skills. From vibrant paintings to intricate sculptures, the exhibition is a testament to the creativity and talent that thrives within our school community. Take a moment to immerse yourself in the beauty and thought- provoking messages conveyed through these captivating pieces of art.

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Moreover, if you are a fan of live performances, the stage area will be brimming with captivating acts throughout the day. Our school’s music club will showcase their melodious tunes, encompassing a wide range of genres to cater to diverse musical preferences. From soulful ballads to energetic pop hits, the performances will leave you captivated and tapping your feet in rhythm. Additionally, the drama club will take the stage, presenting an enthralling play that promises to transport you to a world of imagination and storytelling. Be prepared to be enthralled by the talents and dedication of our fellow students, who have poured countless hours into perfecting their performances.

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In conclusion, the revival of our annual school fair is a momentous occasion that brings together our school community in a celebration of talent, camaraderie, and enjoyment. From the tantalising food stalls to the exhilarating alumni football match, the fair offers a wide array of activities that cater to diverse interests. It provides an opportunity for students, teachers, and alumni to connect, reminisce, and create lasting memories. So mark your calendars and join us on 29th May 2021 from 12 pm to 4 pm for an unforgettable day filled with laughter, delicious food, captivating performances, and the spirit of togetherness. Let us embrace the joy and excitement that the school fair brings, and make this year’s event a resounding success. See you there!

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