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Spencer Lam
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letter to the editor 格式

相信各位DSE考生對 Letter to the editor 都不會陌生,因為它就是卷二和卷三的一位常客。

今期筆者就會為大家詳細介紹及解釋在寫作 Letter to the editor – 給編輯的信時需要注意的地方,

希望大家日後見到它的時候不在徬徨而是因為熟悉並感到快樂!!

letter to the editor 格式

Letter to the Editor 格式

Letter to the editor 格式 千篇一律,基本上都是一樣的,所以只要緊記格式就不需要另作改變。

Dear Editor, 【稱謂語】

Opening 【引言開首】

Body Paragraph 1 【正文段落 1】

Body Paragraph 2 【正文段落 2】

Body Paragraph 3 【正文段落 3】

**Body Paragraph 正文段落中間可能需要加上過度段

Counter-Argument 【駁論(不一定需要)】

Ending 【結尾】

Yours faithfully, 【祝頌語】

Name 【姓名】

Letter to the Editor format DSE

Letter to the Editor 名副其實是一封信。

雖然不是指郵寄的那些信件,但是 Letter to the editor 格式 其實就是一封書信。

自然包括上款、下款及內文,大家只要緊記,及不要另外自行創作!!!

Letter to the Editor 格式 1. 上款

Dear Editor 格式

Letter to the Editor 上款

Dear Editor” 是 “Letter to the Editor” 的常用起始語,用來表示寫給報紙、雜誌或其他出版品編輯的信函。

這個起始語的用意是向編輯表達尊敬和禮貌,同時明確信件的目的。

用 “Dear Editor” 作為 “Letter to the Editor” 的開頭有以下原因:

  • 尊重編輯:使用 “Dear Editor” 是對編輯的尊重和禮貌的表達。 編輯在報紙或雜誌中負責選擇和編輯文章,因此,這個起始語可以顯示你對編輯工作的認可和尊重。
  • 無需具體稱呼:在寫給編輯的信函中,你可能不知道具體的編輯姓名或不確定信函會由哪位編輯處理。 因此,使用 “Dear Editor” 這個通用稱呼可以確保你的信函能夠被傳達給適當的人員。
  • 突出信函目的:”Dear Editor” 直接表明你的信件是寫給編輯的。 這樣,編輯在閱讀信件時就能夠明確其目的,以便更能理解你的觀點和意見。

另外,Dear Sir/ Madam, 都可以。

Letter to the Editor 上款 常見錯誤

Letter to the Editor

有時人們可能會使用錯誤的稱呼,例如寫成 “Dear Editors” 或 “Dear Editor’s“。

正確的稱呼是 “Dear Editor“,表示你正在寫給編輯本人,而不是所有的編輯或編輯的所有權。

Letter to the Editor 格式 2. 開頭/引言

Letter to the Editor opening

Letter to the Editor 開頭

Letter to the editor」的開頭或引言應該能夠吸引讀者的注意力,並清晰地表達您的觀點和意見。

以下是開頭或引言常用的寫作技巧:

Step 1 特別身份 + 目的

提出自己的身份或目的作為開頭或引言,可以並帶出您要討論的主題或問題。這樣能夠使您的信件更直接且具體,讓讀者更快地了解您的立場和意圖。

例句:

As a regular reader of your column who takes heed of the prevalent trend in cosmetic surgery, I am writing to bring to the public’s attention the seriousness of such a phenomenon.

作為您專欄的常規讀者,我對整形手術的普遍趨勢非常關注。我寫信是為了讓公眾關注這種現象的嚴重性。

As a concerned member of society, I am writing to express my opinion on⋯

作為一個關心社會的成員,我寫信是為了表達我對⋯的觀點。

As a parent myself, I am writing to draw the attention of the readers to…

作為一位自己也是家長的人,我寫信是為了引起讀者的關注⋯

Step 2 背景

在撰寫一封給編輯的信函時,提供一些背景信息是很重要的,這樣可以幫助讀者了解您所關注的問題的背景和相關情況。

背景信息可以包括事件的起因、發展情況、相關數據或統計數字,以及任何其他相關的事實。

例句:

another article/ a survey/ a report points out that…

另一篇文章、一項調查、一份報告指出…

While flicking through the newspapers, it is not uncommon that we are overwhelmed with the news about …

在翻閱報紙時,我們常常會被關於…的新聞所淹沒。

There is a diverse spectrum of opinions of XX.

對於這個XX,有各種不同的觀點存在。

The advocates cling to the idea … while critics point their fingers at …

支持者堅持著這樣的想法⋯而批評者則指責⋯

Letter to the Editor 格式 3. 內文

Letter to the editor 內文

Letter to the editor 內文 應包含以下元素:

  1. 論點和證據:在信件的主體部分,列舉您的論點並提供相應的證據、事實或例子來支持您的觀點。這些論點應該清晰、有說服力,並與主題相關聯。

  2. 個人經歷或見解:如果適用,您可以分享自己的個人經歷或見解,以加強您的論點或提供更深入的背景。

  3. 舉例或引用權威:使用具體的例子或引用權威來支持您的論點。這可以提供更具說服力的證據和支持。

Letter to the Editor DSE 寫作技巧

Letter to the Editor DSE 寫作技巧

每段主題句

主題句 + (               )

The first point that I would like to focus on is (that)+ sentence

第一點我想集中談的是+句子

內文萬用句式 例句

Arguably, the drug should not have been made available.

或許這種藥根本就不該上市。

By minimizing public exposure to this surgery can such an obsession with plastic surgery be mitigated.

只有通過減少公眾對這種手術的曝光,才能減輕對整形手術的痴迷。

This exemplifies the loss of personal judgment for those who have an obsession with physical beauty.

這個例子顯示出那些對外在美有著痴迷的人失去了個人判斷力。

It has long been acknowledged that 句子

長期以來,人們一直承認……

In the same vein, undergoing plastic surgery is tantamount to exchanging our faces for banknotes.

同樣地,接受整形手術等於用我們的臉換取了紙鈔。

Most of the activities, if not all, are confined to traditional ball games: basketball, volleyball, football badminton, just to name but a few

大多數活動,甚至全部,都局限於傳統的球類運動:籃球、排球、足球、羽毛球,僅舉幾例。

Many people tend to bury their heads in the sand when it comes to violence against animals.

當涉及對動物的暴力行為時,很多人往往選擇對此視而不見。

Depressing yet common as it seems, many students put their heads down on desks and take a nap during lessons.

雖然看起來令人沮喪而又普遍,很多學生把頭埋在桌子上,在課堂上打盹。

Will the lessons become more interesting and enlightening after waking up one hour later? The answer is an emphatic no. 

在一小時後醒來後,課程會變得更有趣和有啟發性嗎?答案是斷然不會。

Letter to the editor 過渡段

Letter to the editor 過渡段

過渡段在一封信函中扮演著重要的角色,它有助於引導讀者從前一段落的主題轉移到下一段的主題。

過渡段應該建立前一段和下一段之間的關聯性。它可以提供一個平滑的過渡,使讀者能夠無縫地從一個主題轉移到另一個主題。

承上 (總結前一段)

過渡段還可以用來總結前一段的主要內容或觀點。這有助於幫助讀者回顧前一段的內容並確立一個連貫的思路。

例句:

Solving the above problem/issue may appear to be a hollow talk.

解決上述的問題/議題可能會顯得只是空洞的言談。

啟下 (提示下一段主題)

過渡段可以提供一個暗示或引導,讓讀者知道下一段將要討論的主題是什麼。

這有助於保持讀者的關注並預備他們對新主題的理解。

例句:

Having delved into the root of the problem, I have conjured up two concrete suggestions.

在深入探究問題的根源後,我想出了兩個具體的建議。

Letter to the editor 駁論

Letter to the editor 駁論

Letter to the editor 駁論當然要視乎題目,不一定需要的。

駁論可以幫助您更全面地論述您的立場,並向讀者展示您對問題的深入思考和理解。

Critics put forth the idea that ___. However, I am certain that this is not the case

批評者提出了一個觀點,即___。然而,我確信這並非事實。

This argument may seem reasonable on the surface, but upon closer inspection, it does not hold.

這個論點表面上看起來可能合理,但仔細檢查後,其並不成立。

Letter to the editor 結論/結尾

Letter to the editor 結論

Letter to the editor 結論/結尾可以透過總結立場以及抒發期望來結束信件

總結立場

結論提供了一個機會,使讀者清楚地了解您的立場。您可以再次明確表明您的觀點,並確保讀者對您的論點有明確的理解。

例句:

I hope that this letter may shed some light on our dissatisfaction/our anger. 

我希望這封信能夠為我們的不滿/憤怒帶來一些關注。

期望/向讀者發出呼籲

結論也是向讀者發出呼籲或行動的機會。您可以鼓勵讀者進一步思考這個問題,提出自己的觀點,或者講出自己的期望。

It is earnest hope that our classmates’ opinions are taken into consideration so that our concerted efforts can make our campus more vibrant.

我誠懇地希望我們同學的意見能被考慮進去,這樣我們共同的努力才能使我們的校園更加充滿活力。

So what do you prefer, gold or banknotes, inner beauty or physical beauty? Make your wise choice.

至於你更喜歡金子還是紙鈔,內在美還是外在美,請做出明智的選擇。

Letter to the editor 下款

Letter to the editor Sign-offs

Letter to the editor」的英文下款通常包括您的姓名、地址和聯繫方式。

這些信息可以用來驗證您的身份和確保您的信件是真實的。下款的典型格式如下:

Yours faithfully,

[Your Name]

Letter to the Editor DSE 範文

Letter to the Editor Sample DSE

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2021 DSE english paper 2 Q2

Letter to the Editor DSE 題目

Learning English through Social Issues

Although studies show electric cars are more environmentally friendly than petrol cars, less than 3% of all vehicles sold in 2020 worldwide were electric.

Write a letter to editor of Hong Kong Post.

  • Discuss why sales of electric vehicles are so low.
  • Suggest what can be done to attract more people to drive these vehicles.
2021 DSE english paper 2 question

2021 writing Q2 開首

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am writing to express my deepest concern about the public’s lack of enthusiasm in purchasing, and by extension, driving electric cars.

我寫信是為了表達我對公眾對購買電動汽車缺乏熱情的深切關注,進而對駕駛電動汽車表示深切關注。

As an environmentalist, I was somewhat appalled at reading the statistic that less than 3% of all vehicles sold in 2020 were electric.

作為一名環保主義者,我對 2020 年售出的所有汽車中只有不到 3% 的電動汽車的統計數據感到有些震驚。

I have been ruminating on the possible reasons and solutions for the last few days, and hope to bring them to the attention of your readership.

這幾天我一直在思考可能的原因和解決方案,希望能引起讀者的注意。

2021 writing Q2 內文 1

dse 2021 english paper 2 part a

Out of all the reasons, there are none more significant than the lack of supporting facilities. 

在所有的原因中,沒有比缺乏配套設施更重要的了。

Hong Kong, for all its claims of being a high-tech city, is oddly bereft when it comes to electric car chargers and parking spaces, and so are many other cities such as Tokyo and Chicago,

香港雖然號稱是一座高科技城市,但在電動汽車充電器和停車位方面卻很奇怪,東京和芝加哥等許多其他城市也是如此。

I went and counted chargers in the vicinity of my apartment, and behold, found no more than three.

在我的公寓附近並數插電器,發現不超過三個。

Lamentably, technology has not yet progressed to the level where electric car batteries can last as long as a full tank of petrol – even 24 hours of continuous use is pushing the limit for electric cars

可悲的是,技術還沒有發展到電動汽車電池可以像一整箱汽油一樣持續使用的水平——即使是 24 小時連續使用也在推動電動汽車的極限

It is precisely under this backdrop that electric chargers are so crucial for increasing electric car usage.

正是在這種背景下,充電器對於增加電動汽車的使用量至關重要。

That people select to purchase a petrol-driven car. In favour of an electric car is conceivable – who would enjoy planning their day-to-day lives around charging spots, and who would not want to avoid the humiliation it running out of battery in the middle of a six-lane busy road during rush hours?

人們選擇購買汽油驅動的汽車。支持電動汽車可以想像 – 誰會喜歡在充電點周圍規劃他們的日常生活,誰不想避免在高峰時段在六車道繁忙的道路中間耗盡電池的羞辱?

2021 writing Q2 內文 2

2021 DSE english paper 2 sample

Another reason that comes to mind is insufficient promotion.

我想到的另一個原因是促銷不足。

We rarely see an advertisement on promotional material for electric cars, and even if the occasional Tesla or Henchy makes it into the spotlight, it is often to ostentatiously show off the car, while the tangible benefits are left out of public discouragement.

我們很少在電動汽車的宣傳材料上看到廣告,即使偶爾的Tesla或Henchy成為人們關注的焦點,也往往是炫耀汽車,而有形的好處卻被公眾勸阻。

Had I not been deeply involved in environmental patterns since a young age, I would not have known about how electrical cars eliminate nitrogen oxides and sulphur oxides car exhaust, thus helping reduce acid rain, not to mention putting a stopper in global warming.

如果我從小就沒有深入涉獵環境模式,我就不會知道電動汽車如何消除氮氧化物和硫氧化物汽車尾氣,從而幫助減少酸雨,更不用說阻止全球暖化。

Inertia and the tendency to choose the path of resistance have long plagued us. Such is the flow of mankind.

惰性和選擇抵抗道路的傾向長期以來一直困擾著我們。這就是人類的流動。

Without informing people of better alternatives and letting them know that they have a choice, how can people be jerked out of their inertia and realize the advantages of driving an electric vehicle?

如果不告知人們更好的替代品,並讓他們知道他們有選擇,人們如何才能擺脫慣性並意識到駕駛電動汽車的優勢?

The current situation is dire but not irredeemable. I have been able to come up with suggestions, and I sincerely hope there will be implemented in the near future.

目前的局勢是可怕的,但並非不可挽回。我已經能夠提出建議,我真誠地希望在不久的將來能夠實施。

2021 writing Q2 內文 3

2021 dse英文卷二題目

On the top of the list is offering economic incentives.

排在首位的是提供經濟誘因。

It is unfathomable that a couple of years ago, the transport sector has received sizeable subsidies to upgrade their buses to Euro V models, yet civilians are unable to benefit from similar subsidies to track their petrol-driven car for an electric car.

令人難以置信的是,幾年前,運輸部門已經獲得了相當大的補貼,以將其公共汽車升級到Euro V車型,但平民無法從類似的補貼中受益,以跟蹤他們的汽油驅動汽車的電動汽車。

Surely, the number of existing car owners must outreach potential car owners. The sales of electric cars can be greatly boosted.

當然,現有車主的數量必須覆蓋潛在的車主。電動汽車的銷售可以大大提高。

By cost reduction purchasing an electrical car, more people will be enticed to buy one and make a change.

通過降低成本購買電動汽車,更多的人將被吸引購買並做出改變。

2021 writing Q2 內文 4

Under no circumstances should we underestimate the effectiveness of installing more facilities such as electrical car changes.

在任何情況下,我們都不應低估增加設施(如電動汽車更換)的有效性。

The recycling movement is a case in point. Ever since the tricolon recycling bus became a common sight on a sheet, the willingness of people to recycle has shown an uptick.

回收運動就是一個很好的例子。自從三克隆回收巴士成為紙上的常見景像以來,人們的回收意願就出現了上升。

Similarly, promising sufficient chargers will lower the hurdle of driving electric vehicles on the chargers so that the public will be cognizant of an electric car ownership.

同樣,承諾足夠的充電器將降低充電器上駕駛電動汽車的阻礙,以便公眾瞭解電動汽車的擁有權。

To amplify the effect and kill two birds with one stone, why not print promotional content detailing the boon of driving electrical vehicles and the chargers so that the public will be cognizant of the cogent reasons for why they should switch to an electric car?

為了放大效果,一石二鳥,為什麼不印刷宣傳內容,詳細說明在駕駛電動汽車及電動車充電器的好處,以令人信服的原因讓公眾了解他們為什麼要改用電動汽車?

With the ubiquitous, pervasive presence of chargers, people will realize that electric cars are no more inconvenient than a petrol cars.

隨著充電器無處不在,人們會意識到電動汽車並不比汽油車不方便。

people will realize that driving electric cars is no more inconvenient than a petrol car, people will realize that they too can contribute to the prevention of climate change, and people will realize that there is nothing stopping them from switching to an electric car.

人們會意識到駕駛電動汽車並不比汽油車更不方便,人們會意識到電動汽車也可以為防止氣候變化做出貢獻,人們會意識到沒有什麼能阻止他們轉向電動汽車。

2021 writing Q2 結尾

conclusion

In conclusion, though it is upsetting that people should have such an aversion towards purchasing electric vehicles, it is only a human response to the lack of chargers, subsidies and promotion.

總而言之,雖然人們對購買電動汽車有這樣的反感是令人不安的,但這只是人類對缺乏充電器、補貼和促銷的反應。

We must take concerted efforts to persuade our governments that the above must be implemented so that our roads will one day be free of polluting exhaust fumes.

我們必須齊心協力說服我們的政府,必須執行上述措施,以便我們的道路有朝一日沒有污染廢氣。

I implore you all to take a moment to do your part, so that our next generation can enjoy clear skies and fresh air

我懇請大家花點時間儘自己的一份力量,讓我們的下一代能夠享受晴朗的天空和清新的空氣

You faithfully,

Chris Wong

Chris Wong

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