【DSE English Writing】5** 狀元作文必用詞彙句式

Spencer Lam
Spencer Lam
英文補習名師,港大一級榮譽,多年英文補習經驗,歷年來曾教授超過1000名學生,學生遍及各大名校,由初中至成人英語皆可因材施教,獲《TVB》、《Now TV》、《經濟一週》、《晴報》、《親子王》、《經濟日報》等專訪
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5** 狀元秘密 作文必用句式

[DSE English Writing]我們經常聽到5**嘅句式好勁,但到底點勁法先?!以下落黎就睇下你同5**狀元用字上同句式上差幾多,睇下你係咪5**同學啦!

用字篇~

平時同學會寫:  5**同學會寫:  
形容(我)緊張

1.  I felt nervous.       

2. I was worried.   

1. 我感到緊張。

2. 我很擔心。

1.  I always feel a tinge of nervousness.

2. My heart was beating fast.

3. He suffocated me and I was about to die.  

1.我總是感到緊張。

2.我的心在跳動。

3. 他令我窒息,我快要死了。  

比賽刺激+氣氛很好

The competition is very exciting, and the atmosphere is good.   

比賽非常刺激,氣氛很好。  

The thrills and spills of the competition and the raving atmosphere have made my school life memorable.   

比賽的刺激以及狂歡的氣氛使我的學校生活令人難忘。  

(某事)能解決問題

This can solve the problem.  

這樣會解決問題。  

This policy would effectively dig into the root of the problem.  

這項政策將有效地挖掘問題的根源。  

遇上錯誤解釋

1. This may be true. But their claims are ridiculous.

2. In fact, these are not true.  

1. 這可能是對的。 但是他們的說法是荒謬的。

2. 實際上,這是不正確的。

1. Their reasons seem comprehensible and convincing.

2. Nevertheless, their claims are simply arrogant, misguided and flawed.  

1. 他們的理由似乎是可以理解和令人信服的。

2. 然而,他們的主張僅僅是傲慢,誤導和有缺陷的。

(某事)很受歡迎

K-pop is very popular.   

K-pop非常受歡迎。

用Take something by storm  

例句

1. The trend to send kids to study overseas has taken Hong Kong by storm.

2. K-pop has taken Hong Kong by storm.   

1.送孩子去海外學習的趨勢 席捲了香港。

2.韓國K-pop 席捲了香港。  

(某事)引人關注

We pay attention to this problem.   

我們留意這個問題。

1. The grave poverty problem has become the focal point of attention. 

2. This issue has become the talk of the town.    

1. 嚴重的貧困問題已成為關注的焦點。

2. 這個問題已經成為全鎮的話題。

舉例子

1. For example, (sth)

2. Such as / like …. (sth)  

1. 例如,(例子)。

2. 比如… (例子)。

(Sth) is a glaring/ striking example.

1. Playing badminton is a glaring example.

2. English is a striking example.  

1. 打羽毛球就是一個明顯的例子。

2. 英語是一個引人注目的例子。  

句式篇~

平時同學會寫:  

5**同學會寫:  

This measure can really/very/extremely help improve physical health.

這項措施確實可以幫助改善身體健康。

Only through this measure can the physical health of the citizens truly be safeguarded.

只有通過這種措施,才能真正保障公民的身體健康。

 

 

We should adopt some measures.

我們應該採取一些措施。

The clock is ticking now. We have to adopt some measures.

時間已經無多。 我們必須採取一些措施。

 

 

Others may argue that class positions are the driving forces.

其他人可能會爭辯,階級地位是驅動力。

Opponents would counter my stance, contending that class positions are the driving forces.

反對者會反對我的立場,認為階級地位是驅動力。

 

 

There are a lot of job opportunities such as hotel and finance industry.

香港有好多就業機會包括酒店, 金融等。  

Hong Kong is home to a myriad of job opportunities in different fields, inclusive of the hotel business, retail business, finance business, you name it.

您可以在香港的不同領域中找到無數的工作機會,其中包括酒店業,零售業,金融業。

5** 狀元 其他作文必用句式

...have no choice but to...

中文解釋:別無選擇只好…

5** 狀元會寫:

As the American forces pounced furiously on them, Japan had no choice but to surrender in 1945.

It is difficult, if not impossible to...

中文解釋:…很困難,甚至沒可能

5** 狀元會寫:

It is difficult, if not impossible to master a new language in two months.

It is difficult, if not impossible to stop the spread of sensationalism in the media.

... is a top priority of ...

中文解釋:…是…的優先

5** 狀元會寫:

Getting rid of Community Party participants was a top priority of  the Nationalists throughout the 1920s and 1930s.

The government should give top priority to to advancing the economy and raising the standard of living for Hong Kong residents following the rejection of the proposed constitutional reform.

... adds fuel to ...

中文解釋:…為… 火上加油

5** 狀元會寫:

The pacifist constitution of Japan was amended by Shinzo Abe have added fuel to the Sino-Japanese relations.

Things have taken a sharp turn in recent years

中文解釋:這幾年有很大改變

5** 狀元會寫:

Engineering was once a well-liked major for undergraduate students. Nonetheless, things have taken a sharp turn in recent years. The best students are no longer drawn to engineering.

have fought tooth and nail

你可能會寫:

Working adults have worked hard for our city which is the target of this trip:

5星星狀元寫嘅句子:

Working adults have fought tooth and nail (竭盡全力) for the betterment (更好) of our beautiful city, which once again meshes well with the mission of the trip.

make the first step

你可能會寫:

It is time to first develop links with the community

5星星狀元寫嘅句子:

It is high time for us to make the first step (踏出第一步) to develop closer links with the community.

是時候邁出第一步,加強與社會的聯繫了。

pin down the reasons

平時你會寫:

The reason for the declining English standard of the student in Hong Kong is obvious

5**狀元會寫:

It is not difficult to pin down the reasons for the exacerbation of the English standard of the students in Hong Kong.

不難找出香港學生英語水平惡化的原因。

there is room for more to be done.

平時你會寫:

The policy is a step in the right direction, but it is not good enough.

5**狀元會寫:

The policy is a step in the right direction, but there is room for more to be done.

該政策是朝著正確方向邁出的一步,但仍有更多工作要做。

Not That...rather

平時你會寫:

Instead of the students nowadays having insufficient entertainment, they are distracted by a lot of entertainment.

5**狀元會寫:

Not that the students nowadays have insufficient entertainment. Rather, they are distracted by the kaleidoscope of entertainment.

並不是說現在的學生娛樂性不夠。相反,他們被娛樂的萬花筒分散了注意力。

sows the seed

平時你會寫:

Bad awareness of hygiene leads to the outbreaks of COVID-19

5**狀元會寫:

Insufficient awareness of hygiene sows the seed of outbreaks of COVID-19.

衛生意識不足播下 COVID-19 爆發的種子。

under the pretext that

平時你會寫:

Many students always make excuses for not to study due to having not enough time

係咪好累贅?

5**狀元會寫:

Many students are reluctant to study hard under the pretext that there is not enough time

很多學生以時間不夠為藉口不願意努力學習。

The spotlight has fallen on

焦點落在了…

平時嘅你會寫:

Everyone is looking at the leading horses in the race.

5** 狀元會寫:

The spotlight has fallen on the leading horses in the race.

The investigation has laid bare the unwelcome truth that

顯示了不好的…. 多用於Report/Proposal

平時嘅你會寫:

The investigation reveals  that the celebrity is a drug addict

5** 狀元會寫:

The investigation has laid bare the unwelcome truth that the celebrity is a drug addict.

Bear witness to the fact that

見證了…/證明了…

平時嘅你會寫:

The endless conflicts in Ukraine and Russia proves that their relationship is bad

5** 狀元會寫:

The ceaseless conflicts in Ukraine and Russia bear witness to the fact that their relationship is deteriorating rapidly.

The pendulum has swung the other way

事態/景氣已由另一邊走過來了

平時嘅你會寫:

Hong Kong was a manufacturing powerhouse before, but everything is changed now. Hong Kong is now an international city.

5** 狀元會寫:

Hong Kong was a manufacturing powerhouse before. But the pendulum has swung the other way. Hong Kong is now a cosmopolitan city

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